The Burial Plot by Elizabeth MacNeal - Review

I read a review of this book somewhere and thought it sounded great, so I requested it at the library. However, I didn't really enjoy it at all. It took me absolutely forever to read because I just couldn't get into it. I did feel like it picked up at the end, but getting there just wasn't worth it for me. I won't rush to read anything else by the same author, that's for sure. 

The book is about Bonnie. It is set in 1839. She lives in London, sharing lodgings with her lover Crawford and his friend Rex, who hates her. They vie for Crawford's affection. Crawford thinks himself a cut above quite a lot of people. He takes bets on games in pubs. He gets Bonnie to entice men outside - them thinking they can buy her for the night or whatever - and then he and Rex attack and rob the men. 

One night Bonnie entices a gentleman outside, but things don't go as planned when Crawford and Rex don't show up, and the man starts to assault her. She hits him, and he whacks his head. Bonnie is certain she has killed him and thinks she will hang for the crime. Crawford however has a plan. He has seen an advert for a lady's maid wanted at a mansion in Richmond, which at that point was not part of London (I did like this historical part of the book!). Bonnie goes, applies for the job, gets it, and moves in, safe from the hangmen of London.

The family she moves in with is the Moncrieffs. The father is somewhat stilted, closed off. The daughter, Cissie, is sixteen and a strange little thing, but she and Bonnie grow close. Cissie's mother, Josephine, drowned in the pond earlier in the year, and the whole house is in mourning. There are only two members of staff, Annette, the housekeeper, and Manton, the butler. Mr Moncrieff has fallen on hard times and it seems likely that he will have to declare himself bankrupt. He spends a lot of time sketching mausoleums for Josephine and it is this which gives Bonnie an idea.

She has heard Crawford talking about the new cemeteries in London, like Highgate, and says that Mr Moncrieff could sell some of his grounds to make a cemetery, where he could also make a huge tomb for Josephine. He doesn't disagree, but nothing happens until Crawford turns up.

Posing as Bonnie's brother, he inveigles his way into the household and persuades Mr Moncrieff to start the cemetery. But he is cunning and he has so many plans and so much bitterness. Bonnie is quite stupid, though, and there are many times when she could do something but she just waits for things to happen. I liked her as a character but so much of the book just drags and there's no action. It's supposed to be really gothic and I thought the setting was good, but the slowness just stopped it from being really gothic for me.

In all I'm giving it two out of five, possibly a two and a half. But I won't rush to read anything else by her!